Without Pockets Opinions on Serenity

vrelix — Sun, 11 Feb 2007 21:54:49 PST

your colour choice and design is like someone playing the drums on ecstacy...who has never played drums in their life. you should complete it instead of having it in a box...oh wow, its inside the box...just fix those and the shirt will be good, after all the concept isn't terrible..

Like it, love it, want it!

Montana_Dakota — Sat, 03 Feb 2007 10:46:38 PST

With some slight changes this will be a great design. I think the purple lines should continue up and fade out a bit. Finish off the red circle and the green one, but fade the green one out as well. That will stop it from looking to boxy.

mauni — Fri, 02 Feb 2007 23:05:59 PST

you should make an allover print out of this.i would wear it immediately. i know its not possible in withoutpockets....

never too late

The Ooze — Thu, 01 Feb 2007 13:42:03 PST

gwyniipooh, it's never too late to submit a design. This is an ongoing design competition, with winners chosen every few weeks...

so don't be shy, show us what you got!!

Grim — Thu, 01 Feb 2007 04:23:44 PST

The other one is far more appealing...although Im glad there's no text on this one.

mehkhb

gwyniipooh — Thu, 01 Feb 2007 01:42:51 PST

n e ways, just wondering if it is too late to submit a design and have it printed on a shirt????? i dont mind if i dont win, it would be great to have a printed shirt though..

btw nice design very funky

Chipolata — Wed, 31 Jan 2007 20:28:36 PST

The concept is good, but I agree, it looks very boxy. The colours don't work very well either.

A few changes ...

WurlyGurl — Wed, 31 Jan 2007 20:18:32 PST

Thinking of makin' it a little smaller perhaps ... and finishing off the large red circle so it's not so box-y ... what do you think?